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I'm okay,
I don't care if you don't believe me,
because,

it is normal for these tears to roll down my face,

it is common for my eyes to be puffy and red,

it is tradition that my lips do not smile,

it is natural that I've lost all interest,

it is always the same that my heart will never be at rest...

it is average for my body to slouch,

it is typical that my head hangs and pouts,

it is popular for me to say "I'm fine",

it is odd for you to say I am lying.

I'm okay,
I promise you I am,
No way do I let you get to me,
no way do you affect me,
(no...I'm not okay...)
This is shit... -__- But yet I still wrote it. Anyways, shitty stuff happening, wanted to let it all go. Here y'all are.
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AwesomeTilde8D Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This really touches my heart, mostly because i know it to good from myself :cry:
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student Writer
:) thanks
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passion00 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Somehow I just understand this...
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Writer
Yeah, thanks.
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passion00 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
you're welcome ^.^
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
and i can relate to it as well
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student Writer
:) Yeah
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
i love it it shows your emotion :)
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you. :)
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Mer-ryGoRound Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012   Artist
I can totally understand where you're coming from. I sometimes don't know if it makes me happy or angry to hear people say "what's up?" knowing they don't expect any other answer than "good/fine" :) So I think it's really good because you put your heart into it and it shows :nod: The structure and the rhythm is great :)

Sorry I'm so slow :)
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Writer
Lol it's fine (to the slow part) Thank you though, for commenting. It was just something I wanted to let out. :)
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Mer-ryGoRound Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012   Artist
You're welcome :)
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Dickywebster Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012
Lies, its a good piece :)
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you.
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Dickywebster Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
Your welcome
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Safe-As-Houses Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the middle of it... And the last stanza is perfect. Really suits the rest of the poem.
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks
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Shasta-Rose Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well-expressed and I personally understand so much. Thanks for sharing.
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks and you're welcome. xD
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
i like it .. mind if i put it in my notebook?
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Writer
I don't mind. :) And thank you.
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
ok thanks :) and your very welcome
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Lovely-Chains-2341 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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